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When the Gym Music Is Never Loud Enough
JD@jordandalton_

A gym-goer shares a relatable moment about listening to workout music at maximum volume. He jokes about checking his phone after a set only to find a warning notification about potential hearing loss.

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When the Gym Music Is Never Loud Enough

A gym-goer shares a relatable moment about listening to workout music at maximum volume. He jokes about checking his phone after a set only to find a warning notification about potential hearing loss.

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Analysis

POV
The hook — as said out loud
when you check your notifications after a set but it's just your phone telling you you're gonna go deaf
The script — as said out loud
Let's make the most of the night. Like we're gonna die.
How it's built2 beats
  1. 01
    The Bold Proposal

    Propose an immediate, intense action or a specific mindset for a certain period of time.

  2. 02
    The High-Stakes Justification

    Add a dramatic, extreme reason why the action must happen right now, using a heavy metaphor or life-or-death comparison.