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When Your Patient Starts Telling a Wild Story and You're Behind Schedule
Dr Ed Robinson Aesthetics@dr_edrobinson

This video humorously captures the awkward moment a healthcare professional tries to end a consultation while a patient tells a wild or overly detailed story. The creator uses a dramatic audio clip to represent the patient's story as he slowly backs out of the room to stay on schedule.

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When Your Patient Starts Telling a Wild Story and You're Behind Schedule

This video humorously captures the awkward moment a healthcare professional tries to end a consultation while a patient tells a wild or overly detailed story. The creator uses a dramatic audio clip to represent the patient's story as he slowly backs out of the room to stay on schedule.

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Analysis

POV
The hook — as said out loud
The other thing is, my sister had a baby and I took it over because she passed away and then the baby lost its legs.
The script — as said out loud
The other thing is, my sister had a baby and I took it over because she passed away and then the baby lost its legs.
How it's built4 beats
  1. 01
    The Casual Add-on

    Start mid-thought as if adding a minor detail to an existing conversation to lower the viewer's guard.

  2. 02
    The Subject Introduction

    Introduce a person, item, or situation that is initially positive or neutral.

  3. 03
    The Sudden Escalation

    Introduce a massive, tragic complication that forces the narrator into a position of responsibility.

  4. 04
    The Final Shock

    Deliver a final, unexpected blow that is physically or situationally extreme.