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When the Client Turns Down a $15M Deal
Jerrell Young | Colorado Springs Real Estate@jerrellmarshallyoung

A realtor reacts with total shock and frustration after a client turns down a multi-million dollar, decade-long lease agreement. The client apparently rejected the deal to 'grind' in the music industry instead of securing their professional future.

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When the Client Turns Down a $15M Deal

A realtor reacts with total shock and frustration after a client turns down a multi-million dollar, decade-long lease agreement. The client apparently rejected the deal to 'grind' in the music industry instead of securing their professional future.

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The hook — as said out loud
What do you mean he turned it down? He turned it down. You're going to have to help me with this. 15 million dollar deal or a 10 million dollar.
The script — as said out loud
What do you mean he turned it down? He turned it down. You're going to have to help me with this. 15 million dollar deal or a 10 million dollar. Which one did you guys offer? It was 5 million. He signs a lease for an entire decade. What am I supposed to tell these people? I don't know what to tell you, brother. He just said he wants to grind from the ramp. Grind from the ramp? What does that even mean?
How it's built6 beats
  1. 01
    The Shocking News

    Establish the main conflict by reacting to a surprising decision.

  2. 02
    The Stakes

    Mention high-value numbers or opportunities to show what was lost.

  3. 03
    The Reality Check

    Clarify the actual, lower value involved to add more detail to the chaos.

  4. 04
    The Commitment Trap

    Show that the person has committed to a different, less logical path.

  5. 05
    The Weird Reason

    Reveal the strange or slang-heavy reason the person gave for their choice.

  6. 06
    The Confusion Loop

    End with a question that highlights the absurdity of the reason.